What is my thesis?
-America is trying to gain aknowledgement,but doing so poorly, by making McDonalds their representative. And with the long list of injustices America has inforced to is only deterioting it's image.
If I hadn't written this, would I have convinced myself of this thesis? What would I be skeptical about?
-I suppose so...I pretty much say it point blank but i would need more evidence to convince the reader. And i would be skeptical of my quote,since i dident cite them...
Does my evidence support my thesis?
-I suppose since i dident cite my quotes it would be hard to call it "evidence". So, no my evidence does not support my thesis.